As a writer, your job is to torture your readers with tension. The fun of fiction is anticipation, and if your story doesn't have it your readers won't stick around. Here are 3 ways you might be killing your story's tension and losing readers.
Avatar the Last Airbender: past and present Suki doesnt look much different. ^ that's because Suki's the only one of the original team avatar that doesn't appear in Legend of Korra. I still cry << I kinda wish adult Aang looked different