This idea of waiting in a queue suggests to me a feeling of time. Waiting in a queue can be a very slow process where you feel every second go by. This has a connotation of waiting in a queue to die from smoking. It may take months, years for the effects
The use of cigarette burns in the eyes shows devastation cigarettes leave in their path and the physical harm they have on our bodies. The eyes look like demon eyes. This could be used to show the idea of tobacco addiction being the demon within us which we need to fight. As a series of images this would be extremely powerful. Almost like the person is staring not just at you but through you. This could be further developed into a moving image. The eyes could move as if watching you.
Hypnotherapy for Smoking Cessation is about educating your subconscious about the real reasons for quitting smoking and removing any subconscious hurdles that are actually preventing your from quitting and be permanently SMOKE FREE.